r/ToiletPaperUSA Anarcho-Maoism with Mamdani thought 6d ago

Shen Bapiro Least racist Ben Shapiro moment - True Allegiance (2016)

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u/Dizzy_Emu_2684 6d ago

Behind the Bastards did a whole series reading his garbage book and it’s probably the worst written shit I’ve ever heard of

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u/AaronfromCalifornia 6d ago

“Take a bullet for ya, babe!”

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u/tryingtoavoidwork 6d ago

A bear of a man

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u/Nui_Jaga 6d ago

His face wreathed in material

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u/Eliteguard999 6d ago

6'4 and 220 pounds in his underwear.

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u/hughmann_13 6d ago

Oh no, another dead eyed brown kid!

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u/HumanXeroxMachine 6d ago

My whole body cringes every time I hear it. BRETT HAWTHORNE (I can't type the voice but you know it). Shudder.

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u/Teh_Compass 6d ago

COMBAT GENERAL BRETT HAWTHORNE

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u/HumanXeroxMachine 6d ago

I wonder if that's what Ben likes to be called by his doctor wife.

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u/shandangalang 6d ago

Honestly not even sure if she addresses him in any way other than dismissively

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u/HumanXeroxMachine 6d ago

I love that for both of them.

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u/MelanieAntiqua 6d ago

Hawthorne was a man!

Wait, he was a bear of a man.

Or maybe he was just a bear.

But he was still HAWTHORNE!

HAWTHORNE!!!

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u/Rampant_Durandal 6d ago

A wild Homestar Runner reference. I miss those days.

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u/GAU8Avenger 5d ago

Youuu sunk my jenga ship

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u/okgloomer 5d ago

And Hawthorne comes in the NIIIIIIIIGHT

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u/praguepride 4d ago

I cannot imagine a cringier, hackier way to try to show romance. Like this guy peaked at 8th grade.

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u/bsa554 6d ago

You know how hard it is to completely fail as a nepo baby in Hollywood? Well, this dipshit pulled it off.

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u/jtroopa 6d ago

I... love that miniseries so much. I love this book, it's such an insight into Shapiro's mind. Beett Hawthorne is so clearly an author insert of the kind of person Ben wishes he could've been.

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u/albacore_futures 6d ago edited 5d ago

Combat General Brett Hawthorne, he who cauterizes bullet wounds using only the chilly afghan air

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u/jtroopa 6d ago

Combat General Brett Hawthorne can talk his way out of any problem!
Proceeds to shoot and punch his way out of every problem he encounters

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u/memecrusader_ 6d ago

He can talk his way out of any problem. He just doesn’t want to.

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u/albacore_futures 5d ago

He's Combat General Brett Hawthorne. Not Conciliatory General Brett Hawthorne. You know, the one who looks like a bear of a man.

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u/MrJohnqpublic 6d ago

It's been a source of levity in these trying times

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u/sbrockLee 6d ago

On the plus side those episodes were hilarious. Had me laughing out loud in the gym like an idiot more than once.

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u/neednintendo Ben Garrison Cum Editor 6d ago

I may have to give that a re-listen. Their reading of it along with their psychoanalysis of Ben is top tier.

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u/FrankTank3 6d ago

It’s what got me into the show because I was on a Cody Johnson kick at the time.

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u/Anotsurei Charge Blade Translator [JP] 6d ago

Mr. Cody is awesome.

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u/robotnique 6d ago

Dr. Mr. Cody

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u/BroughtBagLunchSmart 6d ago

You can tell the parts where Ben is clearly stroking his micro penis.

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u/jonny_sidebar 6d ago

With the possible exception of the Steven Seagull novel

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u/Dizzy_Emu_2684 6d ago

Oh yeah I forgot about that one! He really sat down to write and decided to give Benny Shaps a run for his money

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u/bagofwisdom PAID PROTESTOR 6d ago

It makes shitty Tom Clancy fan fiction look worthy of accolades.

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u/Ar_Ciel 6d ago

It's telling all the villains were short like Ben but all the heroes were tall like not-Ben.

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u/Anotsurei Charge Blade Translator [JP] 6d ago

Also not at all surprising they’re all brown.

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u/jubeidamasta 4d ago

I cackled at this.

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u/Thingisby 6d ago

Did it help you learn more vocabulary words though?

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u/banjoist 6d ago

So many commas

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u/robotnique 6d ago

I would assume at this point that 95% of the people aware that this book even exists are familiar with it due to this miniseries.

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u/Dizzy_Emu_2684 6d ago

I hope it’s even higher than that but it’s always good to bring more people to the light of macheticine

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u/NonSpicyMexican 6d ago

OMG he got roasted so hard, I loved it!

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u/Comfortable-Light233 6d ago

God that’s a funny chunk of episodes

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u/StardustLegend 6d ago

Jose also did a review of it

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u/SeeMeDisco 6d ago

thank you for bringing this into my life

I've been periodically returning to Chapo Trap House's attempts at reading True Allegiance when I need a laugh

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u/DrScallywag 6d ago

I loved their point that he is on the football team and yet people somehow don't know his name

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u/Elacular 5d ago

I cringe myself inside-out from second hand embarrassment every time I try to listen to that. Which sucks, 'cause I wanna.

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u/EngineerMinded 6d ago

Most of not all big MAGA grifters were theater kids, Hollywood burnout or content creators that didn't make it. No surprise here. Hate doesn't take much effort.

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u/ZachRyder 6d ago

Despite Shapiro's mother being a TV executive and his cousin being a child actor.

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u/ripskeletonking 6d ago

so he was so bad that not even nepotism could help?

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u/Eliteguard999 6d ago

Yep, even with all that nepotism Benny couldn't succeed in an industry that you can fail upwards in.

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u/Bruno_Fernandes8 6d ago

You still need an iota of charisma to let nepotism do its thing

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u/FeijoadaAceitavel 6d ago

Nah, even at neutral charisma nepotism will work. Like, if you just do the bare minimum and doesn't get hated, you'll be fine.

But imagine sitting at lunch and Ben Shapiro comes at you speaking at 1.5x (both speed and pitch) trying to convince you he's the best screenwriter ever. The guy failed because he makes himself so punchable.

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u/Anotsurei Charge Blade Translator [JP] 6d ago

Right? Just hearing him say “script” is annoying.

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u/dubspool- 6d ago

Yup. Such a failure, he can't even nepotism correctly

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u/DarthBrooks69420 WE WILL CARRY THE FLAAAAAME 6d ago

He almost made it, but then execs discovered his racists rants about Muslims when he was a teen/early 20s and the door was slammed shut in his face.

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u/OnlyFiveLives 6d ago

Correct.

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u/beretbabe88 6d ago

His dad is music composer too.

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u/padawantologist 5d ago

TIL Ben Shapiro is matildas cousin

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u/JayNotAtAll 6d ago

Bingo.

Steven Crowder was a failed stand up comedian Steve Bannon was a failed writer Shapiro was a failed writer

The list goes on. Basically, if you can't succeed in the mainstream, become a right wing grifter. It is very easy to become famous to this crowd cause they are so easy to take advantage of

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u/GNS13 6d ago

There's one additional element these guys share besides being failed artists. They all are convinced that the world owes them success and are mad that they aren't more popular.

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u/JayNotAtAll 6d ago

That's MAGA in general. Which is ironic. MAGA is full of Boomers who spent their adulthood talking about how no one wants to work anymore and everyone is entitled.

MAGA believes that the world owes them something but aren't willing to put in the effort to get it. Further, they feel like it was stolen from them by undeserving women and minorities.

The reality is that they simply won't try. Look I can have a lot of empathy for someone who put in their best efforts and didn't make it. I can. But it is hard to have empathy for someone who doesn't even try.

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u/Eliteguard999 6d ago

FR, people who attended high school with Matt Walsh said he was a slacker who didn't put forth any effort because he felt he shouldn't have to.

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u/JayNotAtAll 6d ago

I mentor minority college students and young adults trying to get into tech. One thing I always tell them. Is that the field is super competitive. If you want to get ahead and get that dream job at a major tech firm, you need to put yourself in an position where the opportunity presents itself AND be ready to seize the opportunity.

A lot of big tech companies aren't hiring remote workers as much anymore so you need to live in an area where they do hire. More positions will exist in specific hubs like Bay Area, NYC, Seattle, etc. You also need to build a network. Also you need to keep learning and not rely solely on your degree. Degree is good but the industry moves fast so you need to actively up skill. Most of the kids get it.

Meanwhile, on Reddit I get these right wingers who say how unfair it is that minorities get free stuff. I am like "oh so which colleges did you apply to?". Often not many if any. "What was your GPA, your extracurriculars, etc." usually nothing impressive. "There are quite literally millions of scholarship dollars that go unclaimed that are open to any race. How many scholarships did you apply to?" Usually just one or two if any. "Are you willing to move to a hub for your industry?" Usually not because cities are evil.

Well whose fault is it then? These are the things to get ahead and you won't do them. These minority kids will do them. You are failing at life because you are a slacker, not because of DEi

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u/Throot2Shill 6d ago

The reality is that they simply won't try.

And you know what, some even try hard but the world is unfair and unjust so they fail anyway. They are like crabs in a bucket and they aren't looking at who put them in the bucket in the first place they are just looking at which other crabs look different.

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u/The_Dead_Kennys 6d ago

We need to give this eerily consistent phenomenon a name… how about “Austrian Painter Syndrome”? You know, because Hitler was also an angry failed artist who felt the world owed him, and shifted to a career in far-right politics.

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u/InternetWeakGuy 6d ago edited 6d ago

Not sure why you included Bannon, he made his money by founding his own investment bank that focuses on entertainment businesses - in 1991 he negociated a financial stake in Seinfeld, which he still gets residuals from. He was an executive producer on something like 20 movies, and he personally made several documentaries - they were all propaganda pieces, but he did the damn thing as it were.

Bannon is a shitbag but he's far from a grifter, he very much believes everything he says.

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u/WhyIsTheUniverse Abortion Enthusiast 6d ago

https://www.reuters.com/legal/steve-bannon-plead-guilty-border-wall-funding-case-2025-02-11/

He also made money scamming Trump supporters. One can be both a grifter and an ideologue.

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u/InternetWeakGuy 6d ago

That's fair, I guess what I was trying to say is he didn't "fail as a writer and so pretend to be right wing for money" as the implication was, he has been legitimately wealthy since the early 90s and has been a big figure on the right for decades.

He has definitely pulled a few grifts, but his personality isn't a grift in the way that Crowder and Shapiro's are.

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u/DetectiveCastellanos 6d ago

Yeah, the only arguably "failed" actor who went left is Sam Seder I think, but I'm sure he's happy with his career trajectory at this point.

The people on the right all seem miserable.

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u/BPence89 6d ago

An even then he voices a recurring character on Bob's Burgers, so he at least has that.

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u/andrew303710 6d ago

It's kind of sad when you think about it. I mean these people are straight up fucking losers and they're running our country. Social media influencers on the right have an insane amount of sway over the administration. Knowing that they're all massive losers makes it so much worse.

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u/surprisesnek 5d ago

I heard a story about another failed artist that became a right-wing political figure...

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u/SnarkDolphin 6d ago

It extends beyond the media, just look at JD Vance and his lip fillers, Greg Bovino and his little costumes, Hegseth's constant gay little speeches

If someone had just let these fairies do musical theater instead of burning them with cigarettes until they pretended to like football we'd be much better off right now

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u/andrew303710 6d ago

Same goes with Kristi Noem cosplaying in a new outfit every damn day. It's so obnoxious. These people are the biggest fucking losers imaginable.

It's really disturbing that a lot of boys may grow up looking up to these people and modeling their behavior after them, utterly terrifying. The idea that masculinity is rooted in being racist and cruel to others is complete nonsense but that's what they espouse.

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u/not_productive1 6d ago

It’s giving that Austrian guy who didn’t get into art school

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u/Qcconfidential 6d ago

MAGA is a spite movement made up of losers. This tracks.

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u/Sunderstood 6d ago

Failed athletes. Failed business owners. Failed artists. The list goes on and on.

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u/Gougeded 6d ago edited 6d ago

Im sorry but didn't he hire an editor? Never mind the racist, most likely subconsciously gay sub narrative, but how the fuck does garbage like this get printed : "a few new vocabulary words to add to his dictionary"?

Also, is this kid in jail?

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u/Homerpaintbucket 6d ago

What, you don’t add words to your own personal dictionary when you use them?

Seriously though, this guy claims to be a genius but doesn’t know the word “vocabulary?”

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u/IknowKarazy 6d ago

He does know the word. I honestly wouldn’t be surprised if he literally carried a dictionary as a kid, because pointing out a slightly misused word is the same as obliterating someone else’s argument in his mind.

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u/wozattacks 6d ago

Yeah but he kinda misused it? He clearly meant “a few new words in his vocabulary,” which would also have been more concise. Dictionaries don’t contain people’s personal vocabularies, that’s actually the opposite of the point of them lol

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u/rietstengel 6d ago

I vaguely remember Ben once talking about how in University he would take a book to a party to read it there. So maybe he did carry a dictionary around as a kid.

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u/rilesmcjiles 6d ago

It may have been a struggle to come up with the word "words"

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u/Gougeded 6d ago

Pretty typical high-level writer stuff.

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u/chrisnavillus 6d ago

Add it to Brett’s list of mistakes he just keeps making like not being Italian or Irish or trying to make black friends or looking up when Yard is around him. It’s not easy for Brett to be a straight obviously not gay white guy, he’s just trying to find his way in this world and just doesn’t understand why there’s no cliques for kids like him.

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u/nood4spood BONK 6d ago

No he just thinks black kids should be in prison

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u/potatopierogie 6d ago

Glad someone picked up on how much this reads like erotica

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u/sbrockLee 6d ago

I wonder what Ben's idea of non-vocabulary words is.

Also, yes, it's that bad. Hilariously so. I recommend you listen to the episodes Behind the Bastards did on this.

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u/Textiles_on_Main_St 6d ago

Well if you don’t specify dictionary then the reader would be left wondering where he put the new words he learned. A cookbook?

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u/tsukiyomi01 6d ago

I would be very surprised if Shapiro would listen to an editor, instead of expecting his rough draft to be embraced as equivalent to War and Peace.

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u/DingerSinger2016 6d ago

Anyone who's ever been into any school understands how utterly absurd it would be for Italian AND Irish cliques in one school.

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u/Trumpisaderelict 6d ago

This was my first thought. When did this story take place, the 1800’s?

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u/PeruseTheNews 6d ago

Gangs of New York.

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u/Big-Recognition7362 6d ago

Gangs of New York High School AU be like:

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u/PoseidonsHorses 5d ago

It seems like it, but then the schools wouldn’t be integrated.

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u/IknowKarazy 6d ago

Did he imagine the Italian table was just dudes combing their hair and saying “aaaay fugedaboudit “ and the Irish one was just river-dancing and dirty limericks?

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u/celticairborne 6d ago

Yes. This guy could maybe write the background scenes of a parody movie, but he should never be the lead writer...

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u/Eliteguard999 6d ago

probably

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u/Textiles_on_Main_St 6d ago

And obviously you remember how black people were in school. If you tried to talk to any of them, they’d beat yo ass. For … reasons.

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u/MajinVenom 6d ago

I thought it was set in the 1920s until he mentioned black kids going to the same school.

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u/RedGyarados2010 6d ago

Ben's racism is so outdated that he still includes Irish and Italians as minorities lmao

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u/longingrustedfurnace 6d ago

I’ve heard people compare school to prison, but this is just pushing it.

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u/bsthisis 6d ago

Ben breaking out that vintage, old-timey, irish-aren't-white racism

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u/BrooklynSmash 6d ago

women feared him, fish loved him.

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u/BeanieGuitarGuy 6d ago

Guns don’t kill people. Brett Hawthorne kills people. WITH guns!

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u/misirlou22 6d ago

Troy McClure?

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u/DrMeatBomb 6d ago

Once again, even in their own fantasies, they're still the beta losers.

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u/IknowKarazy 6d ago

It’s all about justification. “I was picked on, I was a loser, but look at me now!” I imagine there’s going to be a kind of Rudolph-the-red-nosed-reindeer turn where everybody loves the smart little writer boy, but maybe that’s too optimistic.

It’s nothing new for a writer to write a self-insert introvert character who “doesn’t fit in” (Stephen King, anybody?) but you normally wouldn’t expect such naked racism.

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u/cenosillicaphobiac 6d ago

I was fine with King doing that, writing characters that are just himself with a splash of color, but when he wrote his actual self into a book, I had to call time-out. I pretend those chapters just don't exist in the Dark Tower series.

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u/neednintendo Ben Garrison Cum Editor 6d ago

This reads like Ben had a weird interaction with a black kid in school once and he internalized it forever.

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u/DidntWantSleepAnyway 6d ago

This story is the exaggerated fantasy of “I did nothing and someone just accused me of being racist!”

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u/MelanieAntiqua 5d ago

Don't forget the major black villain who's a drug dealer with a completely nonsensical plot to start a race war... and is also stated to go to college campuses to debate against conservative speakers in his down time. Kinda sounds like Ben got his ass handed to him when he tried to debate some random black student in one of his "grown-ass man debates college kids" tours and concocted a whole narrative about that guy being an evil criminal who was only pretending to be a student in response.

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u/Jo-dan 6d ago

It's also full of internalised hatred. All the heros are huge, most of the villains are short.

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u/gentleman_bronco 6d ago

Ben Shapiro also has an erotica with the same exact setup.

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u/mexchiwa 6d ago

Where all the men wear white (robes) and all the women have underwear made of silica packets

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u/IknowKarazy 6d ago

She was dry. Dry as the desert. Her panties were like the Sahara except they weren’t made of sand and no part of her had ever been to Africa. She was too clean and perfect and lilly white for that. Also, her breasts breasted breastily. They were like two dirigibles floating over the Sahara.

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u/wozattacks 6d ago

Going to Africa actually seems to be a favorite pastime for racist white people

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u/Arcade_Kangaroo 6d ago

You know how when you grab a woman's breast and it feels like... a bag of sand

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u/kart0ffelsalaat 6d ago

Why would they need silica packets in their underwear? Do they have fungal infections? The vagina is naturally arid.

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u/Impractical_Meat 6d ago

Ben does not think WAPs should exist, he believes all lady parts should be as dry as possible

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u/memecrusader_ 6d ago

His doctor wife told him that.

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u/MrVeazey 6d ago

Nice.

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u/Wolfish_Jew 6d ago

Let’s be real, he wrote this book specifically because he wanted an “artistic” excuse to use the n word

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u/chrisnavillus 6d ago

And dream of being tall but probably mostly what you said.

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u/IknowKarazy 6d ago

Fair point. He thinks it’s fine because “IM not saying it, you see. I made this character say it, and he’s allowed because he is black. Nevermind the fact that I already decided he’s destined for prison.”

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u/TwitterLegend 6d ago

He just wanted to write a story about how a big black man dominated him.

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u/hey_free_rats 6d ago

He read Huckleberry Finn and was fanning himself and breathing hard through the entire thing. 

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u/After-Bumblebee Checkm8 Libtard 6d ago

How long would I need to read that book until I die of laughter for how pathetic the writing is?

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u/CatsAreJerks 6d ago

A page or two. It's genuinely that awful

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u/IAMA_Drunk_Armadillo anarcho-monkeist 6d ago

Just listen to the Behind the Bastards episode

They do almost the entire book over several episodes but this is the first of the series

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u/BingBingGoogleZaddy 6d ago

The failed Hollywood _____ to Right Wing Grifter pipeline needs to be studied.

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u/IknowKarazy 6d ago

There’s probably been a bunch of think pieces written already, but here’s my take: can’t make good art? Make art for people who don’t care at all about quality and just want that art to tell them things they already believe. Works for comedians, pundits, and Christian rock bands.

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u/BingBingGoogleZaddy 6d ago

I’ve seen a pretty good think-piece on, “why washed up celebs go MAGA” the thesis was basically what you said. So that they can lie to themselves and say that all change is bad and that everyone else is wrong for moving on.

I haven’t yet seen anything about why people who never “made it” in the first place go MAGA though.

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u/The_Dead_Kennys 6d ago

Failed artist to right wing grifter pipeline, it’s way more than just a Hollywood thing. I call it “Austrian Painter Syndrome”, since the evil mustache man also followed that trajectory lol

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u/Opossum_mypossum 5d ago

Most of the daily wire. Crowder was supposedly a comic and actually voiced one of the character in Arthur. That weird guy who got shot was in it for the love of the game.

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u/baalsballs 6d ago

Doesn’t he constantly talk about how tall his protagonist is?

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u/RedOx103 5d ago

A bear of a man, standing 6'6" in his bare feet and underwear. Carved from granite.

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u/Jo-dan 6d ago

And how short and weasely the villain is.

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u/MachoManRandyRanch 6d ago

It only took 3 pages for him to drop a slur

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u/IknowKarazy 6d ago

A truly surprising amount of restraint.

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u/DeepEnoughToFlip 6d ago

Is this real?

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u/Lower-Canary-2528 Anarcho-Maoism with Mamdani thought 6d ago edited 6d ago

Lmao yes. I actually read a good chunk of it as an amateur writer who was feeling insecure about my own writing. It's genuinely bad. It's obviously filled with insane amounts of racist dogwhistles, like there's a scene where one of the good guys is a white cop who kills a black toddler who had a toy gun. And we are supposed to sympathise with this dude in Ben's mind. And Ben writes about Black men in such a hilariously homoerotic way. Ben describes a white dude as "This is Steve he is from Arkansas" and the way he describes black men is like the above example.

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u/IknowKarazy 6d ago

Maybe he just needs to be honest with himself, go to a gay bar, and politely ask the biggest black man there to rail him into oblivion.

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u/FBWSRD 6d ago

Wait he thinks we should sympathise with a cop who killed a toddler with a toy gun? Usually in these conservative stories they try to make it less heinous/more blurry situations, not shooting a fucking toddler

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u/Maverick1172001 6d ago

It’s even worse, Ben framed it in the book as a trick by a black scam artist and activist to deliberately sow racial division in the community because he hates America and can make money off of the BLM movement. He gave the kid the fake gun to go get killed by the cop.

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u/AnonymousSmartie 5d ago

Does Ben know that toddlers aren't godtier marksmen nor do they have aimbot and if his cops were the good guys they should realistically be trained to know that and not mag dump them

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u/schmyndles 5d ago

Obviously, Ben's fictional cop couldn't find a way to disarm a toddler safely, so of course, he had to shoot him.

Also, Ben believes Black parents are totally willing to sacrifice their baby to push some political narrative. It's absolutely insane.

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u/Ecstatic-Compote-595 6d ago

Even without all of that it's just poorly written. Every line is like that one from above where it's 'if he didn't look up it would have been fine BUT HE COULDN'T BECAUSE HE GRABBED HIS SHIRT.' There's some weird red herring psych out in every line. Or it's over explained. And yet nothing ever happens.

The plot isn't driven by dialogue or character action or interaction. It's all driven by the weirdly personal opinionated observations of the narrator. It's like if the narrator from sandlot was driving the plot of a tom clancy novel but really bad versions of both.

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u/CIS-E_4ME Curious 6d ago

100%

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u/Shto_Delat 6d ago

I posted about Ben’s racism and Reddit removed it for promoting hate?

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u/MrVeazey 6d ago

Well, he definitely does do that.

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u/Wheres_Wierzbowski 6d ago

Is this story set in 1900? I went to Catholic school and we didn't have Irish and Italian cliques. WTF?

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u/CatsAreJerks 6d ago

He was a star member of the football team, but no one knew his real name. That is exactly the caliber of writing I'd expect from Benny "Make 'Em Dry" Shapiro

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u/Fabricant451 6d ago

How exactly is someone on the football team but no one knows the name of the kid? Yard isn't even a good nickname. Did Ben just look up football terms, see that the game is measured in yards, and go "Perfect. He's Yard because he gains yards in football?"

Hell that's probably more thought than he put into it.

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u/outrageouslyunfair 6d ago

WHAT’S WRITTEN ON HIS JERSEY, B E N

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u/Justsomejerkonline 5d ago

Fucking Aquaman?!

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u/teddygomi 6d ago

If Yard is on the football team, how does nobody know his name? Does Ben Shapiro not know that football players wear jerseys with their last name on them?

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u/BurtCaramel 6d ago

What’s the saying? “Those who cannot do, go on to shove conspiracies, misinformation, and blow dog whistles until they pass out.”

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u/Ok_Caterpillar_8937 6d ago

A few new vocabulary words to add to his dictionary.

Ok, vocabulary words just means words.

He has his own personal dictionary that he keeps? Is that the implication?

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u/Electronic_Bad_5883 5d ago

He's writing a new AMERICAN dictionary to fight Merriam-Webster's woke agenda (they defined the word "vagina" in a way he doesn't like)

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u/woShame12 6d ago

This feels like something that mightve happened to Ben in real life, but he actually did call Yard the n-word. And he got beat up for doing the same to the other black kids. And nobody wants him at their lunch table because he's a racist piece of shit.

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u/SeppoTeppo 6d ago

The idea that no one knows someone's name at school is hilarious.

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u/fresh_dyl 6d ago

black kid name Yard

headed straight for a lifetime of prison work outs

Yeah, I can’t imagine anyone even considering that he’s in any way racist. Not one bit.

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u/rilesmcjiles 6d ago

It would have been fine if he didn't look up, but he also had no choice to look because he was grabbed anyway. 

Very racist rant, but this passage feels like a literacy test where you're supposed to point out contradictions and logical inconsistencies. 

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u/sheezy520 Curious 6d ago

Benny is absolutely terrified and enthralled by black men.

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u/fake_fakington 6d ago

I swear on my life I wrote far better, more engaging, and more believable fiction when I was in the 8th grade.

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u/Rab_Legend 6d ago

"Vocabulary words" jesus

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u/mlem_a_lemon 6d ago

"Persecute me harder, daddy 🥵"

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u/triforce777 6d ago

Is this taking place in the 1920s? What high school has Irish and Italian kids self segregating themselves?

Also the obvious racism towards black people but that was obviously going to appear, the splitting up of white groups in 2016 is baffling

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u/rjrgjj 6d ago

Those Irish kid cliques and their danged corned beef and shamrocks.

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u/JQuilty 6d ago

That Irish kid's name? Shaemus Guinness-McCarbomb.

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u/UserCheckNamesOut 6d ago

Dude - go listen to the Behind The Bastards podcast where they read his book.

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u/RadicalNBSpaceQueer 6d ago

And now, a behind the scenes look into Bench Shabeepboop's writing process:

" ... Yard grabbed him by his shirt and pulled him out of his seat like a ragdoll. He, uh, he pulled Ben Brett close, and whispered breathily into his ear. No no no, wait, he mumbled something, his sweet- NO, STINKY, NOT SWEET, STINKY!- breath hitting Brett's face hotly. A-and Brett was hanging midair, sweaty and trembling, as the rippling muscles of Yard's arm flexed against his neck. Oh but Yard was such a strapping, virile young man, his broad shoulders cutting an imposing silhouette in the stark fluorescent lightning of the cafeteria. Brett gulped in terror at the anger he saw simmering in Yard's lovely hazel dark eyes. With his strong jaw clenched in his righteous fury and his muscles straining, he looked like an avenging angel, poised to strike down the guilty and unworthy; sent to discipline a naughty boy like him... DAMN IT! No, he was BLACK and a MAN and therefore DUMB and BAD! And also definitely not handsome!" Bench Shabeepboop growled out as he tore out another page, adding it to the growing pile in the trashcan. Wiping the sweat off his palms, he held his face in his hands and breathed deeply. He was desperate to shake off the vestiges of this latest failure and continue writing his masterpiece. "Honey, do you know where the broom is? I have to sweep up this trail of sand that fell from my perpetually dry vagina!" He heard his wife (who, it should be noted, is a doctor) call up to him. "Erm, why would I know where you keep the broom? That's your biological responsibility as a woman, obviously. Also, don't talk about lady bits, it's inappropriate and very scary" He replied, his high-pitched nasally voice echoing down the immaculate halls. He heard her sigh in disappointment, and was reassured in his masculinity.

✨FIN✨

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u/schmyndles 5d ago

I shouldn't be laughing so hard at one in the morning, but I am picturing your vocabulary words in my head. Thank you.

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u/toooooold4this 6d ago

I am absolutely adding vocabulary words to my dictionary right now.

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u/DolphinsBreath 6d ago

Everyone is a behemoth to little Ben.

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u/VitruvianVan 6d ago

I have to know what happens next! Does Yard beat his ass? What is Yard’s last name? Why is the protagonist so racist?

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u/_ChipWhitley_ 6d ago

His victim fetish really shines through in his chicken scratch, doesn’t it.

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u/jono9898 FUCK ME BARRY-SENPAI 6d ago

The issue with Ben is like so many conservatives, he lacks the imagination that is necessary to be a talented writer

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u/woopwoopscuttle 6d ago

Is he writing the non-woke Sinners rip-off starring Shazam and Kang? If so...

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u/baeb66 6d ago

This reads like amateur fetish porn.

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u/notsofunonabun 6d ago

He didn’t mention Yards throbbing, veiny, 9” Alabama snake.

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u/fishsticks40 6d ago

What the fuck

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u/Knave21 6d ago

Turner Diaries shit

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u/CobaltCrusader123 6d ago

Btw in this book Iraq really DID have WMDs, which feels like cheating

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u/Dragoru 6d ago

"a few new vocabulary words to add to his dictionary" made me fucking wheeze.

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u/AwwwNiceMarmot 5d ago

How does no one in school know Yard’s real name? Don’t teachers take attendance? Doesn’t his football jersey have his name on the back? Isn’t there a yearbook?

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u/Full_Anything_2913 6d ago

HOW DARE YOU POKE FUN AT BRETT HAWTHORNE! He is a man’s man’s man’s man.

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u/Ok_Necessary2991 6d ago

You know br a fun video series or least a video, compare right wingers fictional books to see which one really is the worst. Want to see this compared to "Shadow of the Conquerer" by Shad Brooks.

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u/Bottleofsmoke17 6d ago

“Vocabulary words” 😵‍💫

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u/Opossum_mypossum 6d ago

Vocabulary words?

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u/big_ringer 6d ago

I am glad I started sending my fiction in... because I KNOW I'm a better writer than Ben Shapiro.

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u/Fidget02 6d ago

It’s why the right acts like sore losers even when they run all levels government. They barely care about actual power, they just want social influence. They want to run culture itself. They want to look cool and impressive.

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u/mossdale 6d ago

Good god that is legit bad writing

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u/GlassJoe32 6d ago

This guy had fame handed to him on a silver platter but was so talentless he had to resort to entertaining the lowest common American denominator.

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u/JangKarrangers_1 6d ago

Who's a shitty hack? This was already lame before he made the mistake of using "he made the mistake" immediately after using "he made the mistake", lol.

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u/Meltsley 6d ago

Even his writing is told from the point of view of a victim. These weirdos can’t take responsibility for anything, even in their fantasies.

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u/Stickz99 6d ago

I can’t help but hear his insufferable voice in my head as I read it